Guggenheim and Pollock edit 3

Guggenheim and Pollock edit 3

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05-15-2026, 11:24 PM

Well, I've given this one another try. It was fun to work with two sometimes conflicting critiques, thanks River and John. Still have some spots I'm unsure of and as always I'm unsure if my punctuation makes sense, any help always appreciated.

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Guggenheim and Pollock edit 3 - by wasellajam - 05-09-2026, 08:56 PM

RE: Guggenheim and Pollock - by RiverNotch - 05-11-2026, 05:06 PM

RE: Guggenheim and Pollock - by JohnS - 05-11-2026, 05:32 PM

RE: Guggenheim and Pollock - by wasellajam - 05-11-2026, 06:33 PM

RE: Guggenheim and Pollock edit - by wasellajam - 05-15-2026, 11:24 PM

RE: Guggenheim and Pollock edit - by JohnS - 05-17-2026, 01:49 AM

RE: Guggenheim and Pollock edit - by wasellajam - 05-17-2026, 02:49 AM

RE: Guggenheim and Pollock edit - by busker - 05-17-2026, 04:19 AM

RE: Guggenheim and Pollock edit - by wasellajam - 05-17-2026, 05:34 AM

RE: Guggenheim and Pollock edit 3 - by wasellajam - 05-17-2026, 09:26 PM

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