1 hour ago
Quote:I was thinking to post the re-draft in the more detailed critic, what do you think?
You could continue to work on it here, the critique lines are a bit blurred and at this point in time generally follow the poem. We usually stick to a one thread per poem rule but if you'd like the thread moved to a different workshop just contact a mod and they will usually be happy to do it for you.
Ha, when I posted my critique I forgot to mention that I didn't really understand the title, then I read river's comment and thought "Wow, maybe I missed the film references", I also have not seen it recently. Then I read your comment that you hadn't seen it. I love this site, the varied views are so valuable. It will be interesting to reread it with your comments in mind, looking forward to the edit.