I Sink Irony

[Deor Ana Log]

Thank you the criticism Was (can I call you Was?), one think I would to clarify is the double meaning of "heart sinking", and "still wave". This works in tandem with the lifeboat line, because this poem is an extended metaphor for loving being an ocean. However I do not fault you for not understand this, because as the writer I should have (an have in recent revisions) I have made it clearer. Wishing you the best Monday evening - Deor Ana Log