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[milo]

Jove also felt like a snag when for me God would be just fine. I needed to be reminded that the name Michael is angelic (its my nom de plume, is Michael which is my middle name,  hence my repression of that fact!) I enjoyed rereading the poem without strong need to "correct' anything so the only change I'd recommend is to allow God a role in all this!

Hello

Thank you for reading and commenting.  I have multiple reasons for not using "God" or "Allah" or any of the other representations one of which I did not intend this to be a religious or especially a Christian poem as much as a Mythos poem that exists within the cultural realm.  Jove itself is just an older generic term for God but for me it feels more comfortable and if my readers can be bothered to read it a few times I don't think they will really struggle thatt much with it.

Thanks again.