Morning Star
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Jove also felt like a snag when for me God would be just fine. I needed to be reminded that the name Michael is angelic (its my nom de plume, is Michael which is my middle name,  hence my repression of that fact!) I enjoyed rereading the poem without strong need to "correct' anything so the only change I'd recommend is to allow God a role in all this!
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Morning Star - by milo - 01-12-2026, 02:50 AM
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RE: Morning Star - by milo - 03-27-2026, 02:02 AM
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RE: Morning Star - by Michael Anon - 04-14-2026, 09:19 PM
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