The PigPen's Resplendent Kaffeeklatsch

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First, a dark roast, smash of milk and heaping spoonful of sugar, thanks.
Next, I need another ear, as usual my two are untrustworthy. Asking anyone who wants to play meter with me to drop by at Sapphic Stanza Practice Thread and let me know if you hear what I hear.
Thanks in advance, Tinman in the Rain

I had a raspberry latte and a slice of cake and it was delicious.

I have read through it a few times, I will be by with comments, I owe you on a few but fret not, i do always deliver eventually

lol, I can't be sitting around waiting on you, when the practice threads spark something best to keep with it. Worst thing that can happen is the Pen has to help me put an abomination right, always fun. Duke jumped in, all good here. And hopefully when you say you've read through it more than once you mean the Sappho scan and not the cats on the couch. It's hard not to fall back on overly dense language on those.