No Outlet (new edit 4)

No Outlet (new edit 4)

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03-23-2026, 01:30 AM

(03-23-2026, 12:57 AM)Magpie Wrote: Ah, another edit.

It's the best one yet Ella, the new format with different line lengths works better.

Not really any other suggestions. Another excellent example of workshopping.

Thanks for the read Smile

Yeah, I often take the long way around but the Pen is good walking company. I almost chucked this one because I couldn't find my focus, thanks for sticking with it.

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No Outlet (new edit 4) - by wasellajam - 03-05-2026, 03:08 AM

RE: No Outlet - by fastmarshmallow - 03-05-2026, 11:19 AM

RE: No Outlet - by wasellajam - 03-05-2026, 08:56 PM

RE: No Outlet - by John Beaton - 03-11-2026, 02:34 PM

RE: No Outlet - by wasellajam - 03-11-2026, 04:41 PM

RE: No Outlet - by milo - 03-12-2026, 09:23 AM

RE: No Outlet - by wasellajam - 03-12-2026, 10:10 AM

RE: No Outlet (edit 2) - by wasellajam - 03-13-2026, 01:09 PM

RE: No Outlet (edit 2) - by Magpie - 03-16-2026, 06:01 PM

RE: No Outlet (edit 2) - by wasellajam - 03-16-2026, 06:39 PM