03-11-2026, 10:26 PM
(03-11-2026, 09:47 PM)milo Wrote:Ugh, I just can't get when it works. So much easier to be strict but less intersting variation.(03-11-2026, 08:03 PM)wasellajam Wrote: So, in general, is a line in IT too short to use up the middle with a trochaic inversion?When I read it, I demote rolls. If I try to force the accent on rolls it becomes awkward
Then June rolls in and neighbors clog
the road, no room to turn around;
It sounds okay to me but I worry about disrupting the force pulling the poem along.
Or does "rolls" get demoted, "in" promoted and everyone gets kicked out of school?
But aside from this line, go you think it works as well in IT as IP?


