03-11-2026, 09:47 PM
(03-11-2026, 08:03 PM)wasellajam Wrote: So, in general, is a line in IT too short to use up the middle with a trochaic inversion?When I read it, I demote rolls. If I try to force the accent on rolls it becomes awkward
Then June rolls in and neighbors clog
the road, no room to turn around;
It sounds okay to me but I worry about disrupting the force pulling the poem along.
Or does "rolls" get demoted, "in" promoted and everyone gets kicked out of school?

