03-11-2026, 08:03 PM
So, in general, is a line in IT too short to use up the middle with a trochaic inversion?
Then June rolls in and neighbors clog
the road, no room to turn around;
It sounds okay to me but I worry about disrupting the force pulling the poem along.
Or does "rolls" get demoted, "in" promoted and everyone gets kicked out of school?
Then June rolls in and neighbors clog
the road, no room to turn around;
It sounds okay to me but I worry about disrupting the force pulling the poem along.
Or does "rolls" get demoted, "in" promoted and everyone gets kicked out of school?