Short poem

Short poem

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#17

03-11-2026, 12:44 AM

Someone suggested, "the hope that never dies," was a bit cliché. I think they're correct. I reread the poem a few times and simply deleted that line and I think it was overall a better poem, didn't need to change anything because of that deletion.

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Short poem - by JohnS - 02-20-2026, 11:36 PM

RE: Short poem - by rowens - 02-20-2026, 11:51 PM

RE: Short poem - by JohnS - 02-21-2026, 01:32 AM

RE: Short poem - by milo - 02-21-2026, 05:49 AM

RE: Short poem - by JohnS - 02-21-2026, 06:09 PM

RE: Short poem - by milo - 02-21-2026, 10:18 PM

RE: Short poem - by Mark A Becker - 02-21-2026, 10:55 PM

RE: Short poem - by JohnS - 02-21-2026, 11:16 PM

RE: Short poem - by wasellajam - 02-23-2026, 12:38 AM

RE: Short poem - by JohnS - 02-23-2026, 01:17 AM

RE: Short poem - by milo - 02-23-2026, 01:46 AM

RE: Short poem - by wasellajam - 02-23-2026, 02:04 AM

RE: Short poem - by Magpie - 02-23-2026, 02:40 AM

RE: Short poem - by JohnS - 02-23-2026, 02:46 AM

RE: Short poem - by Smiley - 02-26-2026, 03:13 AM

RE: Short poem - by ilovewomenandbeer - 03-09-2026, 01:48 PM

RE: Short poem - by BLEACHBOX - 03-11-2026, 12:44 AM

RE: Short poem - by johnnyjojo - 03-16-2026, 11:38 AM

RE: Short poem - by JohnS - 04-06-2026, 08:01 PM

RE: Short poem - by jaw_me - 04-07-2026, 07:53 AM

RE: Short poem - by MalingeringDove - 04-13-2026, 11:27 PM

RE: Short poem - by JohnS - 04-07-2026, 09:33 PM

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