03-05-2026, 12:46 AM
(03-04-2026, 11:56 PM)Deadgone Wrote: Your analysis I found really helpful....my background is more of a spoken word and orally is where my poem finds its footing.As far as the poll, you can hit edit on the OP and make any changes you want there, or you can PM a mod and ask them to do it for you.
Im weak on when to add certain things as I had to learn english on my own without a teacher.
I dont even know why I added the poll me being new I thought it was something I was supposed to add. Looks kind of silly now that I think of it.
As far as apostrophes, where words are contracted, I can go through and correct them for you if you'd like. Or not if you like it the way it is. Did you mean angel? If you meant angle you can also edit that through the OP., that one does effect the read. As far as considering punctuation that's up to you as the poet. I can't offer to help because mine sucks, I try but often muck it up and English is my first and only language. If you do want to try it you could PM dukealien and see if he has the time to help, he did a great job helping with one of mine recently.
Happy to have you here. -ella