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Fresh Snow (title updated)
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03-03-2026, 04:19 PM
I was struck by , "Father slept behind a dark window." To me it was a mistake changing it to, "Father remained in a dark window. " Imagery in the first version speaks of, perhaps, a man hiding a sordid secret life behind a life of normalcy. "Slept" to me has connotations of a bed, i.e. sexual misconduct. Or a dead conscious.
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Fresh Snow (title updated) - by jonvandalen - 02-25-2026, 03:38 PM
RE: A Dark Window - by Magpie - 02-25-2026, 10:58 PM
RE: A Dark Window - by jonvandalen - 02-27-2026, 12:14 AM
RE: A Dark Window - by Magpie - 02-27-2026, 03:34 PM
RE: A Dark Window - by wasellajam - 02-27-2026, 11:28 PM
RE: A Dark Window - by BLEACHBOX - 03-03-2026, 04:19 PM
RE: A Dark Window - by jonvandalen - 03-05-2026, 04:35 AM
RE: A Dark Window - by wasellajam - 03-05-2026, 04:41 AM
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