03-03-2026, 04:58 AM
Magpie, dukealien,
Tried to address your feedback as well as I could with this edit. I found one part of S2 sort of redundant while trying to restructure the stanza. I'm hoping that the change pays off in some way and that it reads better.
Tried to address your feedback as well as I could with this edit. I found one part of S2 sort of redundant while trying to restructure the stanza. I'm hoping that the change pays off in some way and that it reads better.