03-01-2026, 04:32 PM
I dont have the authority to critique anyone's work, but since it's kind of a prerequisite here I'll just say what comes to mind.
"My footprints left the sand," reminds me of that old poem "The Footprints in the Sand," about how God carries us through the difficult times in our lives and gives us peace till we get on the other side of our troubles. Then we find ourselves stronger in our faith and as people.
Also the word "Orlando" jumped out at me. I live an hour away from Orlando. Sometimes when I'm scrolling looking for events to attend, I will land on something fun, realize its in Orlando, look at the floor, sigh, and keep scrolling. I sincerely hope you don't live there, it is known for Disney and all-things-fun, yet when I leave I feel chewed up and spit out. I certainly make a connection between that city and the struggles your expressing.
"My footprints left the sand," reminds me of that old poem "The Footprints in the Sand," about how God carries us through the difficult times in our lives and gives us peace till we get on the other side of our troubles. Then we find ourselves stronger in our faith and as people.
Also the word "Orlando" jumped out at me. I live an hour away from Orlando. Sometimes when I'm scrolling looking for events to attend, I will land on something fun, realize its in Orlando, look at the floor, sigh, and keep scrolling. I sincerely hope you don't live there, it is known for Disney and all-things-fun, yet when I leave I feel chewed up and spit out. I certainly make a connection between that city and the struggles your expressing.