My love

[wizzpower]

My love

T’was involuntary, can’t help myself

But I was lost the moment I saw you.

Though many years with me, yourself and I

But, still, I see half of my heart in you.

I stare into your adorable eyes,

Reflection in them revealing my gaze.

Dreaming, melting in the corner like ice.

Wishing the love is passionate like blaze.

The shimmering moonlight, suffice, it should, 

yet dazzling sunlight, that ingrate desires.

No torch in hand so he misunderstood.

In now’s platonic state, lies, he requires.

My whole heart, missing! Who has it with her?

I think I love you, I’m really not sure

I was trying to practice writing sonnets but this concept came to mind so i had to write about it

bad ryhme or meter may or may not have been conveniently intentional :p

might not be good practice to start poking holes in traditional structure without doing okay with it first though...
My love

I have been yours. Without you, I would die.

I never thought we would be stuck as friends.
Though years have passed, with me, yourself and I,
You’ve stolen half my heart; my time suspends.
I lose myself within your lovely eyes.
Although your iris skews oh so astray 
A single silhouette is all that lies,
just near your pupil, there, to my dismay.

The faint glow, moonlight shimmers; cozy bright,
Is not enough for the pathetic fool.
He swoons over the dazzling sun through night.
His lamp, unlit, casts shadows like a ghoul.

My whole heart, missing! Who has it with her?
I think I love you, I’m probably sure.

2nd try
Hopefully my concept is more clear