Four Quintillion Blows - edit
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Greetings, you have some great images here.
S1: Microscopic hammers falling
S2: interlocking ninja spin-stars,
S3: judo master throwing
then in final stanza not sure what is going on.
"One quintillion satin hammers" wut?
overall good writing. keep it going.

JJJ
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Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by dukealien - 02-01-2026, 01:07 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - by milo - 02-01-2026, 02:44 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - by wasellajam - 02-01-2026, 08:28 PM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by dukealien - 02-02-2026, 06:09 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by milo - 02-02-2026, 06:19 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by wasellajam - 02-02-2026, 06:20 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by johnnyjojo - 02-28-2026, 12:04 PM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by dukealien - 03-01-2026, 05:06 AM
RE: Four Quintillion Blows - edit - by johnnyjojo - 03-01-2026, 10:33 AM



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