02-26-2026, 11:41 AM
Hi dukealien,
Thank you for your thoughtful comments. I’m glad some parts of the poem are coming through in the way they are for you. I still found myself wanting to make some changes though, particularly to that 2nd stanza. Would love to hear what you and others might think.
Thank you for your thoughtful comments. I’m glad some parts of the poem are coming through in the way they are for you. I still found myself wanting to make some changes though, particularly to that 2nd stanza. Would love to hear what you and others might think.