02-25-2026, 03:37 PM
(02-23-2026, 10:52 AM)Mic Wrote: I took an eyeball,It’s arresting right off the bat.
hopeful friend,
opened lash-shuttered iris
and found nothing inside.
A surreal image.
But it feels like an image and not a fully realized poem yet.
Who’s eyeball? Who is the subject?
Perhaps this is a bit conceptual about emptiness without having any concrete experience tied to it?