By the Firth
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(02-24-2026, 09:13 PM)Magpie Wrote:  By myself by the Firth

three ottersĀ 
beneath the boardwalk
-- sharing a fish

I pretend to watch nonchalantly
so other people don't know
So effective. I don't know if making the last two lines less blunt would help or hurt. You may not need the last line.
Thanks for posting this.
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By the Firth - by Magpie - 02-24-2026, 09:13 PM
RE: By the Firth - by wasellajam - 02-24-2026, 10:08 PM
RE: By the Firth - by Magpie - 02-25-2026, 01:26 AM
RE: By the Firth - by wasellajam - 02-25-2026, 02:13 AM



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