Short poem

[Magpie]

I'll now retreat back to the familiar world of prose and songwriting. I quite enjoyed this new experience but realise I haven't grasped the difference between a good and a bad poem, which doesn't auger well for my critiquing activity!

You can't give in that quick. You've got obvious talent in rhyming and some nice phrases. It takes a long time to develop poetry skills.

I feel like you said that because you just needed a hug. 

Post some more lyrics. You've been inspiring me to think about writing song lyrics. It's a different art to poetry but there are definite similarities.

Cheers