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speaking in whispers

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02-09-2026, 11:21 AM

I really like this short form poem. I read Tigers suggestions and I feel adding the present tense "returning" at the end adds a sense of urgency I really like in the poem. Regardless I definitely felt very drawn in and wonder if it has a title?
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speaking in whispers - by Mark A Becker - 02-09-2026, 02:49 AM

RE: speaking in whispers - by Tiger the Lion - 02-09-2026, 08:14 AM

RE: speaking in whispers - by Bunx - 02-09-2026, 11:21 AM

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