02-09-2026, 08:14 AM
(02-09-2026, 02:49 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: speaking in whispersHey Mark. Assuming you want to adhere to 5-7-5, a few quick thoughts...
with voices deeper than bones
old ghosts have returned
"their voices..." might be less of a filler word than "with voices"
also "returning" rather than "have returned" - for both filler word and tense