An entrance into trance
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(01-26-2026, 03:22 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  Hello Smiley-

There's a lot to try to get through with this one; you're asking a lot from even patient readers.  It really needs pruning.

I've done plenty of brain dumps, then gone back to retrieve fragments to try to form a poem. Many times I don't succeed. Pick some of your favorite phrases and build on those.

Good luck,
Mark
Yeah its a bit much.. good idea, maybe ill do that but probably not since i wanna focus on making new ones. Interesting thought thou, to make a poem of my favorite parts of this work!
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An entrance into trance - by Smiley - 01-24-2026, 09:33 AM
RE: An entrance into trance - by Smiley - 01-24-2026, 12:54 PM
RE: An entrance into trance - by Smiley - 01-25-2026, 02:06 AM
RE: An entrance into trance - by Mark A Becker - 01-26-2026, 03:22 AM
RE: An entrance into trance - by Smiley - 01-26-2026, 03:37 AM



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