Wisdom of an apple

[milo]

I wasnt going for criticism.. but then i started to wonder how others percieved it.

well, we don't really do "criticism" per se here, we do more feedback.  And feedback is just really how a reader experiences your poem so you might be looking for a little feedback after all.

I see, i shall keep this in mind. Its good to know and it has a different vibe to it to give feedback instead of criticism.

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Just had a talt with the Meta AI on facebook. We discussed this poem and gave me a very perceptive reply about it.. it says -

Life is a balance between indulging in the moment (like eating a cupcake) and taking care of oneself (like choosing an apple).
The apple might symbolize wisdom and simple joy, while the cupcakes represent temporary pleasures.
"Savoring the moment" is a reminder to enjoy life without overdoing it.

yah, AI can give interesting feedback and sometimes it is more perceptive than human poetry readers.  On the site, though, we mostly focus on what humans think and what humans write because most of us are writing for humans so please, be careful to list any feedback or writing produced by AI as AI generated

Thanks