Wisdom of an apple

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it makes sense to me.  If you post in the critical forums instead of the for fun or miscellaneous you are more likely to get that type of feedback (if that is what you are looking for) but I am more than happy to give feedback wherever they are posted.

Let me know what type of feedback you prefer and I can tailor it.

I wasnt going for criticism.. but then i started to wonder how others percieved it.

well, we don't really do "criticism" per se here, we do more feedback.  And feedback is just really how a reader experiences your poem so you might be looking for a little feedback after all.

I see, i shall keep this in mind. Its good to know and it has a different vibe to it to give feedback instead of criticism.

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Just had a talt with the Meta AI on facebook. We discussed this poem and gave me a very perceptive reply about it.. it says -

Life is a balance between indulging in the moment (like eating a cupcake) and taking care of oneself (like choosing an apple).
The apple might symbolize wisdom and simple joy, while the cupcakes represent temporary pleasures.
"Savoring the moment" is a reminder to enjoy life without overdoing it.