Wisdom of an apple

[milo]

ok, thanks for the feedback! i have also posted another poem called "nameless".. it differs from this one, becuse this one has a point, a "real" message. The other is just, whimsy and deep.. does this make any sense to you?

it makes sense to me.  If you post in the critical forums instead of the for fun or miscellaneous you are more likely to get that type of feedback (if that is what you are looking for) but I am more than happy to give feedback wherever they are posted.

Let me know what type of feedback you prefer and I can tailor it.

I wasnt going for criticism.. but then i started to wonder how others percieved it.

well, we don't really do "criticism" per se here, we do more feedback.  And feedback is just really how a reader experiences your poem so you might be looking for a little feedback after all.