Wisdom of an apple

[milo]

Exercise the dream. Eat the cupcake filled with cream. But, too much of the goodies will make you unhealthy and fat. So savor the moment, remeber that. An apple is healthy and naturally sweet. Sugarcoated, what a great treat!

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By the way, u know whats worse than to find a worm in your apple? Finding half a worm haha

Hello

I agree with ella, this might be more impactful and read smoother with some line breaks, maybe something like this:

Exercise the dream.
 Eat the cupcake filled with cream
 But, too much of the goodies
 will make you unhealthy and fat.
 So savor the moment, remeber that.
 An apple is healthy and naturally sweet.
 Sugarcoated, what a great treat!