(01-15-2026, 10:29 PM)wasellajam Wrote: Fentanyl with Friends (edit 2.5, ray and milo)
One shot of Narcan may not be enough
but two or three might do the magic trick,
administered by cops or fam or friends.
Ohio's welcome center has a box
inserted in the lobby wall that's marked
"Find overdose materials inside."
New laws relieve the fear getting caught,
for 911 reports of overdose
there are no charges, everybody walks.
A father left alone to raise his girls
takes home a bit to ease his nightly blues.
His solitary habit laid him out,
now two more babes are left to family.
To live another day with fentanyl
it's best at least to somewhat socialize.
Duke already called it out I thin but you missed an "of" in front of getting caught.
Overall, I like it a lot better. The assonance on "caught" and "walks" is delicious as well
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Fentanyl with Friends (edit 2-- ray, milo)
One shot of Narcan may not be enough
but two or three might do the magic trick,
administered by cops or fam or friends.
Ohio's welcome center has a box
inserted in the lobby wall that's marked
"Find overdose materials inside."
Our laws were changed, they now decriminalize
the 911 report of overdose;
there are no charges, everybody walks.
A father left alone to raise his girls
takes home a bit to ease his nightly blues.
His solitary habit laid him out,
now two more babes are left to family.
To live another day with fentanyl
it's best at least to somewhat socialize.
Fentanyl with Friends (edit #1.1)
One shot of Narcan may not be enough
but two or three might do the magic trick,
administered by cops or fam or friends.
Ohio's welcome center has a box
inserted in the lobby wall that's marked
"Find overdose materials inside."
Our laws were changed, they now decriminalize
the call to 911, charges dropped for drug
offense when calling in an overdose.
A father left alone to raise his girls
takes home a bit to ease his nightly blues.
His solitary habit laid him out,
now two more babes are left to family.
To live another day with fentanyl
it's best at least to somewhat socialize.
Fentanyl With Friends (after dukealien's Good News, But Cold)
One shot of Narcan may not be enough
but two or three might do the magic trick,
administered by cops or fam or friends.
Ohio's welcome center has a box
inserted in the lobby wall that says
"Find overdose materials inside."
Our laws were changed, they now decriminalize
the 911 call, no ones's charged with any drug
offense when calling in an overdose.
A father left alone to raise his girls
takes home a bit to drift off before bed.
His solitary habit did him in,
now two more babes are left to family.
To live another day with fentanyl
it's best at least to somewhat socialize.
(any and all crit is gratefully encouraged), previous versions in the ps
