Because I was born

[busker]

“ Was just reading the re-write again and I think you should at least try it without any of the line end commas you have.  There are so many, they are bothersome and the line ending enough is probably enough”

Thanks for taking the time to come back and provide additional feedbac.

Your  comment made me think about why we have line breaks at all (pauses, a form of punctuation by itself, etc etc -or maybe not)
I have opened a separate thread to talk about it rather than discuss it here.

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