Fentanyl With Friends (edit) (after dukealien)

[wasellajam]

The neutral voice is what puts this over for me. Excellent.

"Find overdose materials inside." is like labeling an AED station
"Heart assistance device inside." Someone is trying so hard to be discrete.
The signs I've seen say "Emergency Overdose / Naloxone Station" and have a big red cross.
I think they should use the brand name NARCAN as that's the most well-known term.

P.S.
L7 "decriminalize" isn't strict pentameter but falls within acceptable use
L8 mine field, good luck with this line
L11 "before" is often my nemesis

Thanks so much, ray. L11 I’m sure I can fix. Do you think I can keep NINEoneONE if the rest of the line was improved? Or is it NINEoneone absolutely? Damn abacus around my neck.

911 call is trochaic/iamb substitution which is perfectly acceptable as long as the rest of your line is iambic . . .

Thanks, milo, I can work on the rest.

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Edit up, hope it's an improvement.