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01-14-2026, 05:02 PM

Hey Ella I rewrote the whole line, I think that paints a stronger picture of what I'm trying to get across.

Thanks for the suggestion!

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Broke Path - by Bunx - 01-13-2026, 11:32 AM

RE: Broke Path - by wasellajam - 01-14-2026, 09:49 AM

RE: Broke Path - by Bunx - 01-14-2026, 05:02 PM

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