Because I was born

[busker]

I have a soft corner for the strange creatures of the Permian.
Not as celebrated as the dinosaurs who came after them, but somehow more enigmatic as a result.
Mammal ancestors. Sort of. Oddly shaped.
And all of them went out in the end Permian extinction.

I’ve been changing the last 3 lines back and forth, to get the right number of syllables. I think it’s ok now, though I’ll feel differently in the morning

They do have a queer look about them

Was there any other type of feedback or discussion you would like to get?

Curious to know your thoughts on how the ending could be made better. Does it need an extra like? Two? It’s sort of falling off at the end, like a table with a missing leg .