01-08-2026, 09:18 PM
(01-08-2026, 09:11 PM)milo Wrote:No, feedback is welcome(01-08-2026, 08:05 PM)busker Wrote: Because I was bornI suppose you post in Misc because you don't want feedback?
Mother, father, gorgonopsid fawn,
ancestors - I love you all.
Because there is nothing afterward,
before - even so, I was born.
Not crossed out as an improbability
by a bone dry statistician god,
but made to be awed
by everything: sludge digesters,
Saturn’s rings,
and Shakespeare.
Then, dissolving
into clay
from which he spawned.
I post in the critical fora when I’m actively looking for feedback, but happy to have it at other times if someone wants to do the hard yards

