The pyrrhic/spondee substitution
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Ugh, I'm so out of practice I feel the wheels grinding just reading your explanation. But yes, I'm in favor of all loop holes that work. I think having a skeleton, preferably almost invisible, to hang the poem on can give it a substance that a reader can feel. Meter, rhyme, the japanese forms with syllable/line count can all pull the reader along, ideally without them even noticing. It's often difficult to work within a framework and still have it read as naturally as free verse but it's fun to attempt and when successful gets those poems to really stick.
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The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by milo - 01-08-2026, 02:45 AM
RE: The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by busker - 01-08-2026, 04:43 AM
RE: The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by milo - 01-08-2026, 04:49 AM
RE: The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by busker - 01-08-2026, 06:18 AM
RE: The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by wasellajam - 01-08-2026, 04:44 AM
RE: The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by milo - 01-08-2026, 08:45 AM
RE: The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by milo - 01-08-2026, 09:23 AM
RE: The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by milo - 01-08-2026, 09:59 AM
RE: The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by milo - 01-08-2026, 08:35 PM
RE: The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by milo - 01-10-2026, 02:27 AM
RE: The pyrrhic/spondee substitution - by milo - 01-10-2026, 05:04 AM



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