01-07-2026, 10:32 AM
Apologies. I wrote "last stanza" and should have said S3. The final two lines read as you have written to me.
It was the y, o, uuu's that I was reading as choked breathing, and was struggling with, so milo's comments seem more appropriate.
Maybe italics or if you could drop the unpronounced letters to a lighter greyscale, with consistent meter in what is to be read/pronounced that might help? I still like the idea, but it's a tricky one to convey.
It was the y, o, uuu's that I was reading as choked breathing, and was struggling with, so milo's comments seem more appropriate.
Maybe italics or if you could drop the unpronounced letters to a lighter greyscale, with consistent meter in what is to be read/pronounced that might help? I still like the idea, but it's a tricky one to convey.