coincidence

[whisperer]

So here's where poetry gets subjective. Personally, I love the line breaks and the heavy imagery. It alludes to a deeper and heavier emotion. I particularly appreciate the single word and finalization of the last line/word. It gives closure to the piece, but maybe not to the emotion. Moving away can also refer to carrying this with yourself. I think it is well done. It's vague enough to allow the reader to fill in the blanks with our own imagination, yet it tells enough of a story to guide us along. Well done. Thank you for sharing.