01-04-2026, 01:38 PM
(01-04-2026, 09:09 AM)dukealien Wrote:Ya, I think you may be right here. I usually tend to avoid any titles like that both in my own reading and in my own writing as they are invariably either mawkinsh, sappy or both.(01-04-2026, 06:45 AM)milo Wrote: ...Nothing - I wouldn't have read it (I'm assuming it would have been without the explanatory introduction). As it is, I saw that as a possible interpretation and discarded it - not because it's an unimportant subject but because it's been done to death. With "Domestic Abuse" as title I might have scanned to see if the title was ironic or even facetious, but not for an exploration of that subject.
But let me ask you this, if this poem was titled "Domestic Abuse" how would that change what you think about when you read it?
Thanks
So (and this may be your point) a title can snake-bite a poem. It can also induce some to read through what they'd pass up with a different one - though they may feel cheated having done so. Personally, I always (1598/1600 or so) title poems - it's part of the work, IMHO. A useful part?
I don't know if I had a point. I just am generally interested in listening to people and seeing what they think about subjects. Poetry is sometimes a good vehicle for that


