Primitive Hope
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(4 hours ago)Bunx Wrote:  Hey Milo thanks for the read! I agree too my inspiration for the poem is mental health viewpoints within tribal communities. Often viewing what the western world views as illness as a blessing. I agree too I think I need to focus in on this one and make it reflection the inspiration more.
Have you considered metaphorically describing this journey to live in this place called life? Or perhaps describing this place? What does this place look like? What does it smell like?

I think I would like that
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Primitive Hope - by Bunx - 01-01-2026, 03:56 AM
RE: Primitive Hope - by dukealien - Yesterday, 08:40 AM
RE: Primitive Hope - by milo - Yesterday, 10:55 AM
RE: Primitive Hope - by Bunx - 4 hours ago
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RE: Primitive Hope - by Bunx - 3 hours ago
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