11-30-2025, 08:53 AM
I just realized youre asking me to change the line 'now is the time for truth and love to last' because last doesn't rhyme with glass, but I think that must just be dialect because in houston they do rhyme, I also mentioned in a message to mostlyholy that because of the number of rhymes, we kinda have to allow for slant rhymes, so every sonnet ive written so far has tried to include a few to reserve other rhymes for later
So my line 'now is the time' is a callback to line 2s 'history hums, but I like now the best'
And im trying to set up for a Volta. But I was expecting some nonsense, thats why I thought at the end we could each rewrite the last sonnet before editing all the poems in between, so im not deadset on any of it at the moment.
So my line 'now is the time' is a callback to line 2s 'history hums, but I like now the best'
And im trying to set up for a Volta. But I was expecting some nonsense, thats why I thought at the end we could each rewrite the last sonnet before editing all the poems in between, so im not deadset on any of it at the moment.
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