11-29-2025, 12:32 AM
I would like to propose a method of editing giving the nature of our creative process here. This is a poetry workshopping forum so I feel its only right to improve it once we've reached the end.
Seeing as how the last sonnet is made up of fragments from each of our works, I suggest we each rewrite our own version of the final sonnet (preferably using the same rhymes and format) that way we can each be influenced by each other's vision. Then, we rewrite each line in order one at a time to make sure it flows like a sonnet, with the rhymes and volta. Then, we each go back amd edit our individual poems to match to revisions. Then, we submit the final product to the miscellaneous forum or members only forum. So critique is optional for readers but not expected, 15 sonnets is pretty massive
Seeing as how the last sonnet is made up of fragments from each of our works, I suggest we each rewrite our own version of the final sonnet (preferably using the same rhymes and format) that way we can each be influenced by each other's vision. Then, we rewrite each line in order one at a time to make sure it flows like a sonnet, with the rhymes and volta. Then, we each go back amd edit our individual poems to match to revisions. Then, we submit the final product to the miscellaneous forum or members only forum. So critique is optional for readers but not expected, 15 sonnets is pretty massive
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