11-28-2025, 08:48 PM
It definitely feels like you are talking about a cat. I am getting playful, active capricious vibes associated with felids. The word "feline" also points to this. That aside I think the poem has a nice musicality to it. The three word interruptions (e.g. ...looping, lifting, mending) do not make much sense to me though. I am unsure what they are referring to.
