11-28-2025, 08:26 PM
Second the comments by sun_sparks on lines 4/8-10. What are the silver boxes? What do you mean by stallions fighting for radiance? It feels very... abstruse? To me at least. I can see how the last two stanzas tie in to rorshach tests, but the leadup, perhaps because the imagery confused me, doesn't clearly link.
