LPiA-25 Nov. 5
#11
"November Yearning"

A single chord, thin as wire,
quivers in the air, unsure,
circling an absent beat;
It slides downward--
unanswered.

The pulse arrives, soft at first,
gathers its darkening weight;
Circles round the trembling line,
anchoring its restless fall,
and carries it

into a harsher register.
The bow draws harder now,
beating back against the drag
of pressure circling without release:
Held taut:

Until the strain thins out,
soft as meltwater;
Leaving no resolution,
no return.

The pattern falters and fades,
and silence follows.



Another attempt at free verse, this time about one of my favourite pieces of music, "November" by Max Richter. Not perhaps very "rock and roll", but middle aged classical composers are sexy, right? I do not "get" free verse, but I do love it and it seemed appropriate for a minimalist composition like "November." I know this is not a "good" poem by any means, but I think a couple of the lines are close to working, and I like to imagine I am getting more of a handle on what free verse actually is. One day.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QofNyoUQZO4
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