Frozen in the rain

[Dris]

The poem ends quite abruptly. It feels like there's no conclusion. Though the rhyming well executed and gives the poem a musical-like rhythm and flow, I feel like the poem is written in such a way that the focus is more on the rhythm rather than the meaning / message of the poem. Rhyme should amplify meaning, not restrict it. Try to avoid rhyming for the sake of rhyming.