A Way Into Their World

[RichardBosten]

I am new to all this my self and on the older side as well. You have a tremendous vocabulary !! Very strong imagery going on in this poem. I come away with an image of a cautiously playful cat . I can almost see the cat deciding whether or not to pounce on the "feathered ruse" . I like that it flows in order and concludes with farewell until the next time . It has a good sense of movement and a strong conclusion. I Really enjoyed it. I also like how you broke up the rhythm with actions that help paint a mental picture .
I'm sorry I can not find anything to offer in terms of critique . It seems really good to me.