11-23-2025, 04:49 AM
I am a beginner myself but i will try and offer advice . Some things to be aware of that are not right or wrong but can change the impact or flow of your poem. 1) Punctuation use of commas, and such help a reader determine a pause and flow. 2) Grammar such as capital I instead of i , or capitalize each first letter of a row changes the formality 3) Meter, Tempo Rhythm . The pace of the poem is it consistent ? Is there a change in meter ? Does that change reflect a change in the poem such as an idea etc.... This is a big one with the way I write but not everyone . I write mine song like.
I really enjoyed the opening line . It does a great job of grabbing interest and set a good tone for the piece. I also like the way the poem progresses in a natural order . I am very new to writing and critiquing poetry but I hope I was able to offer some useful advice. Keep at it !!
I really enjoyed the opening line . It does a great job of grabbing interest and set a good tone for the piece. I also like the way the poem progresses in a natural order . I am very new to writing and critiquing poetry but I hope I was able to offer some useful advice. Keep at it !!