Sonnet challenge crndlsm, mostly Holy, cryptcreeper

[Mostly Holy]

Yes I think it should, as I understand it your last line will be the third line of the fifteenth sonnet. Your rhyme scheme is a classic Petrarchan scheme, but perhaps you could use one of the accepted variant sestets, CDDCDD, or CDDCEE?

Also is "best" a slant rhyme for "palace"? I thought it was, but now I am less sure.