11-20-2025, 02:16 PM
Thanks adat.
I'm struggling with the enjambment on this, as you rightly pointed out. In all honesty, I don't think I'm ever any clearer on why i pick some punctuation over others.
The alignment piece is a good catch. The spacing wasn't quite so drastic in Word, but tabbing made it go insane! Any tech whizzes with an eye for structural poetry got tips for this?
I'll post a revision soon.
I'm struggling with the enjambment on this, as you rightly pointed out. In all honesty, I don't think I'm ever any clearer on why i pick some punctuation over others.
The alignment piece is a good catch. The spacing wasn't quite so drastic in Word, but tabbing made it go insane! Any tech whizzes with an eye for structural poetry got tips for this?
I'll post a revision soon.