LPiA-25 Nov. 17
#13
Musings of an Omniscient Narrator

Much is made regarding
the what for's and don't's
that occur in a forest 
and the import of a witness
to the existential question-

"Can we call it a scream?".

The only certainty now
is your silence - one eye
open to the sky,
the colors of fall collecting
in the awkward L of your hips.

But then, you weren't alone
when you fell.


Another attempt inspired by Todd's observations.  not sure the end lands as hoped.
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LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by Tiger the Lion - 11-17-2025, 11:44 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by sun_sparks - 11-17-2025, 07:13 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by CRNDLSM - 11-18-2025, 12:21 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by Mostly Holy - 11-18-2025, 02:07 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by Bunx - 11-18-2025, 02:40 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by dukealien - 11-18-2025, 05:10 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by Todd - 11-18-2025, 08:02 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by brynmawr1 - 11-18-2025, 08:43 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by Todd - 11-18-2025, 08:50 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by brynmawr1 - 11-18-2025, 09:30 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by busker - 11-18-2025, 09:24 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by MidaPoems - 11-19-2025, 03:41 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by brynmawr1 - 11-20-2025, 06:15 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 17 - by rowens - 11-23-2025, 07:15 AM



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